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critique my rap lyrics (be honest and straight forward)?

Suburban Politician we got to focus on fixing the pain, making sure nobody have poverty as their strain with all the misery, we don't know who to blame, just listen to me we all have something to gain when it comes to peace, we don't have a thought, what will never decease, the crime we have brought let's fight back at least, we already had fought, fuck the parties and the feast, being real is what i sought we now blame the criminal beast, here's what i was taught, remove poverty like it's grease, hope is what we got Rip tupac, one of the realest g's, made the world shocked, showed us the key, that changes was on the clock what everybody should see, poor people still on the block, who will join my plea, help drop the glock it's worse in india, time of untouchable caste, will i every go away, a crime spreading in haste not one dime, is this how suffering tastes, god show me a sign, living that life is a waste i spit these lines to fix the troubles they faced, it's not fine, being suicidal, living in their place will the sun shine for them, but they say they're a disgrace, in their prime, society got them erased want to twine this idea, that they should be replaced, stuck in a bind, their ancestry misery based

Public Comments

1. You sound like the white Vanilla Ice.
2. Love it I love this kind of rap that sometimes reminds me of Lupe Fiasco as not talking about regular things in rap as drugs and women but real problems.